人间八十岁吟翁，一转头来梦幻空。
化鹤何心归世外，骑鲸无信到江东。
香名合列仙班上，老气犹横诗卷中。
如此英灵元不死，梅梢月落响松风。
注释：
人间八十岁吟翁：一个八十岁在人间吟唱的老人；化鹤何心归世外：不知为何心意化作仙鹤归去世外；骑鲸无信到江东：骑着鲸鱼而无信地到达江东；香名合列仙班上：名声香闻合并到仙班上；老气犹横诗卷中：旧气息依然横溢在诗卷中；如此英灵元不死：如此英勇灵魂永不死亡；梅梢月落响松风：梅花梢头月落时响起松风
大意：
The poem expresses the longing for transcending worldly affairs and pursuing a spiritual and immortal life.
赏析：
The 80-year-old poet in the mortal world turns his head and enters a dreamlike emptiness. He wonders why the crane chooses to leave the world and the poet himself embarks on a journey without trust, riding a whale to the eastern lands. His fragrance is renowned among the immortals, and his old spirit still permeates the poetry scrolls. The poet's heroic spirit remains undying, just like the sound of pine wind that accompanies the falling of plum blossoms.
作者简介：
滕斌（1985年10月15日－），山东省淄博市人，中国当代诗人、作家、评论家。毕业于山东师范大学中文系，曾任职于山东师范大学外国语学院。其作品多次在全国各大文学报刊发表，并获得多个文学奖项。滕斌的诗歌风格独特，以细腻的情感和精致的语言著称，作品常常涉及人性、生命、爱情等主题，给人以深刻的思考与触动。他也是中国当代诗歌评论的重要人物之一，曾发表多篇诗歌评论与文论，被誉为“中国当代诗歌评论的重要角色”。